Flash: Rosemary Lane

By Kate Kelly

Read by Alasdair Stuart

I could see the fear in her eyes, and I drew back into the thickets of thorns and nettles, watching her. She was the first person I had seen in the lane for many years, one of the village children, one of the innocents. I did not wish to frighten her, and I felt my loneliness rush in on me like a tide. But she fled, a scrabble of scuffed shoes on the loose stones and she was gone, running through the meadow grass and buttercups, scattering the sheep in her haste. I drifted back into the shadows and wallowed in remorse.

The girl must have told them about me, for the children came back, the boys leading the way, goading, teasing, daring each other to be brave, the girls hanging back in the long grass. They came up to the bank, laughing, throwing stones into the shadows; but stones can’t hurt me, not any more.

 
icon for podpress  Standard Podcast [5:50m]: Play Now | Play in Popup | Download
01
phignewton
February 23rd, 2009 4:38 am

good read, somebody needs a ghost wisperer…

02
February 23rd, 2009 4:38 pm

I had to stop reading halfway and hide behind the sofa. Beautifully written with a spinechilling aftertaste.

03
February 24th, 2009 1:05 am

You’ve created a great mood here, Kate, truly enviable; a rich story told with so few words. Fantastic flash, nice reading — hope to see more from you!

~bint

04
February 24th, 2009 8:40 am

Now that’s my kind of ghost story. Loved the dark atmosphere and the sounds and images you conjured up.

05
scatterbrain
February 25th, 2009 1:33 pm

Nice and atmospheric, but little more.

06
March 10th, 2009 10:24 pm

Another in a good string of stories… you guys are on a roll!

07
JE Stevens
March 12th, 2009 3:43 am

Kate, fantastic to hear your story. It sounds great. Even better than when I read it myself.

08

[...] Rosemary Lane - A short and charming(?) ghost story. [...]