Flash: Daily Double

By Kevin Carey

Read by Rich Sigfrit

“Promise me,” she says.

“I promise.”

“I mean it, Eddie. Blow this and it’s over.”

“Come here,” I say and put my arm around her. “It’s all going to be cool. Trust me.” I slide a finger over the two small welts on her neck. “Still hurt?”

“No.”

“See, I told you, a couple of days.”

For a moment her face softness, then she snaps, “Eleven o’clock. He’s coming right from the airport.”

“Eleven sharp,” I say with a salute. Then I kiss her. A long, lip-locked, eyes closed, reassuring, don’t-sweat-it-kid-kiss. I feel the tiny tips of her teeth against my lips.

She flashes a quick smile. “Where are you going?”

“I may go down for the double, stay a few races.”

“The dogs, Eddie?”

“Just to kill some time, before I have to deal with the Gestapo.”

“He’s not that bad. He just thinks he is.”

I kiss her on the cheek and head for the door.

“Please don’t screw this up Eddie.”

“You have my word,” I say.

(Happy Father’s Day.)

 
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June 15th, 2008 6:42 pm

Interesting flash. Not -really- creepy, but I like the themes.

MORE VAMPIRES, PSEUDOPOD!

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Josh
June 20th, 2008 6:04 am

When he “met” the dad, I literally stood agape. very efffective story. Reminds me of the time I first met my father in law, or rather each time I meet him…

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Ogion The Silent
June 23rd, 2008 2:40 am

I was so sure there was going to be a stake and mallet in her bag at the end. Maybe there was?

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Sgarre1
July 9th, 2008 11:28 pm

Well, it was short. And the voice characterization of the friend was good (the whole co-dependent enabler aspect of him was well done, in fact). I’d rather “cute” story ideas be short like this, so they don’t waste your time if they don’t work.

So, again, not really my kind of thing but painless.

[quote author=Listener link=topic=1697.msg29320#msg29320 date=1213881142] The story was interesting enough, but the reader seemed rushed, like he was trying to emulate Ben Phillips’s blase-character reading style and not quite hitting it.

First vampire story I’ve read where the victim has to be dead BEFORE you drink the blood. [/quote]

Really? They just didn’t want to make any competition for themselves, I assumed. Makes sense with the whole “exponential growth” thing. Besides, they supped seconds later so…not dead for very long.

Thanks for listening.

“Vampires, like virgins or priests, are things that women believe in. We must never fail to humor them in such matters.” Brian McNaughton, “Child Of The Night”

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[...] “Daily Double” by Kevin Carey, read by Rich Sigfrit, is a Pseudopod Flash. Being a vampire has its drawbacks; employment choices, for instance, are limited to nightwork. But you can still go drinking and gambling with a buddy, though don’t stay out too late boozing if you’re supposed to be meeting your other half’s father. Nicely concise, with a satisfying twist. Steve Cooper’s “No Tomorrows” features contract-killing in Istanbul, where the killer is a supernatural being who can make himself invisible. Or is he a human with supernatural powers? Or is this an alternate world? The story is well written in an earthy modern idiom and effectively narrated by Alasdair Stuart, but it left too much unresolved, or simply unexplained, before it ended. [...]

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scatterbrain
July 24th, 2008 5:02 pm

Clever…I suppose.

07
July 25th, 2008 12:35 pm

I enjoyed the conversation with the friend. Very well done.

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RGEvans
August 19th, 2008 11:14 pm

Kevin Carey is a master of contemporary hard-boiled tough guy dialogue. Nice to see him taking a bite out of the horror genre. Look for him elsewhere too—he’s the real deal.

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